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secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

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0 posted 2014-09-01 03:07 PM

Lost

I am lost …

as a candle in
the sunlight,
or a shadow
in the darkness,
a flake in a
blizzard,
a whisper mid
the thunder,
a star in the
Milky Way,
or one drop
of water in the
comprehensive
ocean of your
finest dreams.

I am lost …

in your love

--- b. e. adams (9/01/2014)

latearrival
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since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

1 posted 2014-09-01 05:19 PM

Oh Bruce, this is so lovely.Love it. Jo

secondhanddreampoet
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2 posted 2014-09-01 07:40 PM

Thanks, Jo !

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

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Louisiana

3 posted 2014-09-02 01:11 PM

Through comparisons of the insignificant to the most important place of all... I liked this!

secondhanddreampoet
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4 posted 2014-09-02 02:56 PM

Thank you !

whitbypoet1
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since 2014-09-02

Posts 40

5 posted 2014-09-03 12:17 PM

Great poetry Bruce, you have known love for it to shine out in your words, as it does here...Keith.

secondhanddreampoet
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6 posted 2014-09-03 01:58 PM

Thanks, Keith! ...

Welcome to the fine blue sands of "P.I.P.-land" by the cyber-sea.

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

7 posted 2014-09-03 03:16 PM

Genius, Bruce. Love it.
Ida

bel1e
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since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

8 posted 2014-09-03 08:45 PM

See...that's just lovely, dreampoet~

~write on

secondhanddreampoet
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9 posted 2014-09-03 09:38 PM

Thanks so much to each of you for your most kind comments on this 'write!'

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

10 posted 2014-09-06 04:50 PM

This type of poetry can only come from one who has experienced the love it conveys...thank you for sharing it here..

Goldenrose.

all that live must die,passing through nature to eternity... William Shakespeare

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

11 posted 2014-09-12 04:26 PM

Ah Bruce!
Sigh... just sigh.

secondhanddreampoet
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12 posted 2014-09-12 09:09 PM

Thanks to all of you fine poets for your comment/reply posts on this 'write!'

KAM39
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13 posted 2014-09-19 03:57 PM

Wow, great write.

secondhanddreampoet
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14 posted 2014-09-20 11:07 AM

THANKS !

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