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the blue eyed haunt
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the blue eyed haunt |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest 
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trickling out into the tributaries where watered down reflections dissolve, intravenous pipes a line infusing Mercy into the vein, in purple passion to those that still struggle the ending no longer symphonic or joyful the sound of the one you still cradle held to the breast, in maternal expression defiantly scratches at the gateway bleached out by the mortality of that haunting first kiss this is where they linger to the brown eyed blond, haunted by her blue eyed redeemer there is little solace when the collosal rock, now a tiny stone shuffles round and round without the decency to disintegrate [This message has been edited by EmmaRose (08-24-2014 07:19 AM).] |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Oh, this is delicious, Emma. Your poetry is always so deep I'm almost afraid to comment. You have a way of entwining your words as to give me absolute fits. I loved "the blue eyed haunt." ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (08-23-2014 11:12 PM).] |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
many thanks, Jpat always welcome your insightful comments |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Even if they are nonsensical, eh? ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I'll take out the kicka** comment, this is the blue room after all. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I tried to comment positively, don't exactly know what happened. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
Haha Neither do I I went to sleep early , must have missed something Please do feel free to express |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Naw . . . I think I've expressed quite enough. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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kingsangel Member
since 2009-11-04
Posts 50 |
Wow! excellent poem!! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, that's some imagery to savor slowly, dear EmmaRose, Poetess. Amazing. Love, Margherita |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Absolutely loved the last stanza! The rest of it too . . . much enjoyed... j. |
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