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Open Poetry #49

Almost over you

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

0 posted 2014-08-21 07:56 PM

The heart, now released
yearning for respite, is punished
again, left to wander
the merciless ocean

bouncing along the towering waves
scraping the shells that break over
the foam

if only to bury itself
where it can peacefully mourn
and land in the arms
of the great mother sea

finally free
from its captor called Love.

[This message has been edited by EmmaRose (08-22-2014 09:43 AM).]

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

1 posted 2014-08-21 08:52 PM

Gee, my friend, hopefully this doesn't mean you got a "divorce" (from marriage or just a relationship)...rather is just a write about the reality of . . . that was my first take on this anyway -

Either way, or even if wrongly interpreted, I really like the way you worded it.

enjoyed,

jimmy

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2014-08-21 10:00 PM

Yeah, the lust which turns to love has a very fickle way of maintaining that which it is, Emma. More than likely these days it all fall by the wayside, broken, forgotten and "free" for want of a better word.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

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