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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2014-08-06 07:46 AM



I found myself in strange places
the outcast
even on bright days of festivals
still . . .
I pine not those I left behind
three brothers
stuck in that small Arkansas town
I am

the wanderer
still . . .

©July 11, 2014 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ Tell the truth, but tell it slant.--Emily Dickimsom ~*~

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bel1e
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1 posted 2014-08-06 12:06 PM


being the wanderer surely can be a lonely road...but...as the wanderer in my own family...I can say...I wouldn't have it any other way~*~*~

love your work, man~*~

~write-on~*~

              

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2014-08-06 12:37 PM


Ah, a fellow . . . er . . . sister follower. Thank you Baby Girl.

~*~ Tell the truth, but tell it slant.--Emily Dickimsom ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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3 posted 2014-08-06 06:19 PM


I never really thought about it until now. but you are a wanderer. You take these great pondering walks with us wandering along with you. You wander across time and topics. Wanderer indeed!
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2014-08-06 06:31 PM


now that you mention it you are a wonderful wanderer! You wander past time and topic with your words as we wander along beside you. You have taken us many places and made us feel many things.
JerryPat2
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5 posted 2014-08-06 07:32 PM


Heck Lori, I use all that as a crutch, haven't you heard?

~*~ Tell the truth, but tell it slant.--Emily Dickimsom ~*~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (08-06-2014 10:29 PM).]

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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6 posted 2014-08-06 10:44 PM


Why no, I hadn't. A crutch for whot?


EmmaRose
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7 posted 2014-08-07 11:21 AM


answering your calling though it can be a mixed blessing is your truth
JerryPat2
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8 posted 2014-08-07 12:21 PM


Ahh . . . You got it, Emma, right on as always.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

luminosity
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9 posted 2014-08-07 01:17 PM


ah..outcast? I understand...sigh
JerryPat2
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10 posted 2014-08-07 01:36 PM


Yes luminosity, an outcast by my choosing . . . Thanks for the comment.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Michael
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11 posted 2014-08-07 09:53 PM


I have always felt "the wanderer" was me.  I learned in reading Poe it's a road that many of us actually follow, but most often walking alone.  Bet you I reach the end first!  

Michael

JerryPat2
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12 posted 2014-08-07 09:54 PM


Probably will be a tie, Michael. Thanks.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

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