Open Poetry #49 |
Meadow of Daisies |
Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Gentle of morning Doe and fawn in the clearing Meadow of daisies |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
very pleasant 'slice-of-life' beneath the morning star! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Lovely visual Lori... |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
This haiku is certainly a part of you for I sense you were as one with it as you penned it. ~*~ Tell the truth, but tell it slant.--Emily Dickimsom ~*~ |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
Pretty and palpable |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thanks everybody! The dawn deer and fawn are from another trip but the meadow where I saw them is full of daisies this year. It was not hard to visualize them standing there. And yes, Jerry, I felt very much at one with the moment. Lori |
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Michael
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Posts 7666California |
Sounds lovely, an image I wish I witnessed first hand and could file away for later. Michael |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Nice visual, for sure. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
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sweet early morning image...niiice
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Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A clean sense of here now mellow... good to read you, Lori |
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