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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2014-08-01 09:08 AM




Gentle of morning
Doe and fawn in the clearing
Meadow of daisies





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secondhanddreampoet
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1 posted 2014-08-01 05:04 PM


very pleasant 'slice-of-life' beneath the morning star!
BluesSerenade
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2 posted 2014-08-01 05:52 PM


Lovely visual Lori...
JerryPat2
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3 posted 2014-08-02 01:34 PM


This haiku is certainly a part of you for I sense you were as one with it as you penned it.

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EmmaRose
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4 posted 2014-08-02 01:35 PM


Pretty and palpable
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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5 posted 2014-08-02 04:55 PM


Thanks everybody! The dawn deer and fawn are from another trip but the meadow where I saw them is full of daisies this year. It was not hard to visualize them standing there. And yes, Jerry, I felt very much at one with the moment.

Lori

Michael
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6 posted 2014-08-02 09:03 PM


Sounds lovely, an image I wish I witnessed first hand and could file away for later.


Michael

JL
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7 posted 2014-08-05 12:18 PM


Nice visual, for sure.

JL

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8 posted 2014-08-05 01:49 PM


sweet early morning image...niiice

              

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9 posted 2014-08-15 10:25 PM


A clean sense of

here
now
mellow...

good to read you, Lori

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