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JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2014-07-21 11:15 PM



I hate to do it
but I will have to leave
the Blue Room
it seems the same people
are the only ones posting
over and over again
I loved this place
but something has happened
it isn't the same
eh, my poetry hasn't been up to par
I leave with wonderful memories
goodbye to friends
and foes alike
it has been nice
but it is time to go

©July 21, 2014 / Jerry Pat Bolton


~*~ Tell the truth, but tell it slant.--Emily Dickimsom ~*~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (07-21-2014 11:51 PM).]

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2014-07-22 08:48 AM




Take a vacation
Know there is no place like home
Enjoy someplace else

I understand your frustration. I'll miss you.
Take care!

Lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2014-07-22 09:09 AM


Thank you, Lori.

~*~ Tell the truth, but tell it slant.--Emily Dickimsom ~*~

JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
3 posted 2014-07-24 10:51 AM


Take a break, but get back as soon as you can!!

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

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