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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana

0 posted 2014-07-20 09:37 AM



we're all standing on the edge
the edge of who we are going to be
in the future
tomorrow
shouldn't be looking back
shouldn't dwell on who we were
we need to see what's in front of us
away from
the past and all our mistakes
as we stand in that edge
we're like the sinking sun
when it finally sets
old sol leaves everything in darkness
comes back to a brand new day
ahhh . . . we only know
what we've learned
nothing else
some have learned more
than others
but every one must start from there
and go as far as we can beyond
from where we started
mistakes?
lordy yes, we will make them
just because you have made a mistake
doesn't mean
we've been dealt with a catastrophe
get up
dust yourself off
and tackle that which made you
fall . . .
there is a place within our thoughts
a place where we are aware
of our real self
there is another place
much larger than the knowing place
it is a place full
of thing we do not know
that's our objective
to conquer as much of what we don't know
as we assimilate what we don't know
into what we do know
we will arrive at a grand discovery
that .. .
we have walked these same steps
forever

©July 19, 2014 / Jerry Pat Bolton

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2014-07-20 01:03 PM


"we have walked these same steps
forever"

Well no wonder my feet are so dang tired!

Good write my friend!

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2014-07-20 01:13 PM


Thank you Lori. Now go wash dem durn feeties.

~*~ Tell the truth, but tell it slant.--Emily Dickimsom ~*~

Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
3 posted 2014-07-20 01:30 PM


Feels like forever... forever and a day even.      You know, the problem with walking forward while looking backward is you never really see what you're missing.  That is unless you bump into it, and that kinda spoils the moment anyway.

Michael

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
4 posted 2014-07-20 01:56 PM


Oh absolutely, Michael. Me? I am at a place in my life that I just take it a day at a time. I've been there, done that. Now I just write about it.

~*~ Tell the truth, but tell it slant.--Emily Dickimsom ~*~

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
5 posted 2014-07-21 05:11 PM


Yes...this one has been quite a learning experience. I think I am in college by the difficulty of the lessons.
                               Oda

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
6 posted 2014-07-21 05:29 PM


Heh.Heh I hear you Ida! Appreciate you checking in.

~*~ Tell the truth, but tell it slant.--Emily Dickimsom ~*~

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
7 posted 2014-07-24 11:00 AM


Great lesson to be learned here.
Very good advice, buddy!

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

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