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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2014-07-19 10:26 PM


     Moon-shadows

Though I have tried so
very long to paint this
world with magic words
in bright-delicious colors
and a fine poetic ‘voice’
of both thunder and
the whispering wind,
will I be remembered
even by the ones I loved
so much as more than just
a shadow in a pool of
   moonlight ...

               --- b. e. adams (7/19/2014)



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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2014-07-20 08:56 AM


We all try to overcome though poetry. Sometimes it seems we are standing on a jagged, rock cliff. There is blackness behind us and a roaring, hungry sea in front of us. You write your poetry and you give joy to those of us who read your lines. So many have said . . . Write on.

~*~ Tell the truth, but tell it slant.--Emily Dickimsom ~*~

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secondhanddreampoet
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2 posted 2014-07-20 11:20 AM


"We all try to overcome though poetry. Sometimes it seems we are standing on a jagged, rock cliff. There is blackness behind us and a roaring, hungry sea in front of us."

... yep, that about 'sums it up' for me ... couldn't have been better said (superb observation & comment)!

Marchmadness
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3 posted 2014-07-21 04:58 PM


I read and enjoy poetry written by those long dead. Who knows if anyone will remember us after a time but poetry does bring a bit of joy in a sometimes dark world and sometimes lingers on in the minds of future generations, proving it's worth, I guess. I save many of the best poems I read here in a book. When I am gone my daughter or granddaughters will read them and pass them on.
                               Ida

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