Heidi Faye (my first sonnet)

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

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Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2014-07-18 04:28 PM

She has captivated me from the start,
born pure and innocent as the dove.
What is this new sensation in my heart?
Who is this new creation that I love?
What started as a man and a lover,
became a relationship oh so rare.
She is now a most devoted mother
He loves them as much as his heart can bear
Now that they have gone from two to three,
their love is stronger than it was before.
Was destiny that made them family.
Love fills their hearts, they need not ask for more.
An angel incarnate named Heidi Faye,
she brings such love with her every day.

[This message has been edited by Lori Grosser Rhoden (07-18-2014 07:08 PM).]

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2014-07-18 04:33 PM

Yes! Something very different for you, and a superb first sonnet out of the gate and looking good. Such love shows through within the lines of this beautiful sonnet. Good to see you break out and try something different.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2014-07-18 04:56 PM

Once I got started it wasn't so bad after all!
The topic made it easier. Thanks.

Lori

latearrival
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since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

3 posted 2014-07-19 08:11 AM

Enjoyed this tribute to love and family.JO

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

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a 'Universalist' !

4 posted 2014-07-19 08:32 AM

pleasant sonnet about a super-cutie!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

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Fair to middlin' of nowhere

5 posted 2014-07-19 10:57 AM

Thanks JO!
It is so gratifying to see my son go from a miserable bachelor to a very happy family man.
No worries, they are on solid ground.

Lori

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

6 posted 2014-07-19 11:00 AM

Thanks for letting me know I'm not biased about my first grandchild and she really is a super-cutie. Oh and I'm kinda proud of my first sonnet too.

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

7 posted 2014-07-24 11:37 AM

Heeeheee....
Cute kid, love the sonnet.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

8 posted 2014-07-24 03:38 PM

Thanks JL!
Ironic...I love the kid and think the poem is cute!

Lori

Michael

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since 1999-08-13

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California

9 posted 2014-07-24 11:44 PM

Awe... purely precious. Beautiful tribute.

Michael

Redstart
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since 2014-05-16

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10 posted 2014-07-26 02:21 AM

'she brings such love with her every day'
that's so easy to believe. Sonnet on, Lori.

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