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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2014-07-18 12:04 PM




Am I lazy
or just feeling malaisey
My mood is hazy
No uppsydaisey
just a lack of faze me
Go ahead and taze me

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2014-07-18 12:31 PM


Hah! You'd come alive (in agony) if they did taze ya.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2014-07-18 12:33 PM


I just couldn't work cattle prod into the rhyme scheme, LOL

Lori

JerryPat2
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3 posted 2014-07-18 01:08 PM


Heh.Heh

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JL
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4 posted 2014-07-24 11:23 AM


Got a chuckle out of this one.
"Don't Taze Me Bro!"


JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

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