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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2014-07-14 06:59 PM





Don’t tell me it’s going be alright
That’s not what I need to hear
right now
At this very moment
what is going to be
is too far away for me
It has to be alright now
Even when everything around us
feels out of control…
It is alright
until things get right again
We are in this together
It has never been
I’ll catch you later
when the smoke clears
So hold me tight
and tell me now
what I already know…
Everything’s alright

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2014-07-14 07:12 PM


I love this, Lori. I hope it comes true for you and as soon as possible.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2014-07-14 07:18 PM


Well, the way I look at it Jerry, I just sorta typed up a suggestion, all I have to do now is print it off and leave it somewhere it will get read

Lori

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
3 posted 2014-07-14 09:07 PM


Huh! I would make sure it was seen - like taped to an often used mirror or something. Don't know if it was so much a suggestion, as a plea, and very good one too.

my heart...

j.

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