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secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2014-07-06 09:01 PM


Evening Forest Dreams

Far, far beyond
the vexing world of
   men,  
these ‘endless’ hills
are laced in mountain-
forest mist and painted
by vanishing twilight
and a clear moon rising.
This sylvan stream is
barely seen, whispering
its mysterious secrets
of deepest Time and
  Nature’s truths.
Even the willows have
ceased their evening
  dance
and infinite serenity
settles on this windstill
  woodland world.
Here, in the glorious 'now,'
we are left to stir the
cosmos with only our
  finest dreams.

                --- b. e. adams (7/6/2014)

Several folks have pretty well convinced me that 'word painting' may
be an inescapable fate ...[and perhaps, what good is any poem if
absolutely no one reads it?]


© Copyright 2014 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
latearrival
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1 posted 2014-07-07 01:36 AM


I am happy to hear you will continue to post your beautiful words. Thank you ,Jo
bel1e
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2 posted 2014-07-07 12:43 PM


...and a stunning painting it is, dear poet! Breathtaking!

              

BluesSerenade
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3 posted 2014-07-07 06:47 PM


I for one love reading your poetry..
it takes me to a peaceful place and puts me
in a dream state.  I'm glad you are here.

secondhanddreampoet
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4 posted 2014-07-08 10:50 AM


thanks so much to each of you lovely ladies for your comments on this 'write'!
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