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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana

0 posted 2014-07-03 07:18 AM



when the winds of fate
touched me in my forever
the ground shook
or was that my beating heart
her name was whispered
into my psyche
my heart, my very soul
her perfume
saturated me and my days
turned sunny
filled with potential
when the winds of fate
found me
and gave her to me

©June 25, 2014 / Jerry Pat Bolton



~*~ When politicians give up on liberty, it falls to poets to preserve it. Or write its epitaph. ~*~

© Copyright 2014 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2014-07-03 07:25 AM


I love this! I love when you use this style.
i have always said love looks good on you my friend and it still fits you like a tailored suit. Good morning!


JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2014-07-03 07:48 AM


Yeah, you do say that a lot, Lori. I never tire of hearing it. Thank you so much.

~*~ When politicians give up on liberty, it falls to poets to preserve it. Or write its epitaph. ~*~

bel1e
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since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631

3 posted 2014-07-03 11:34 AM


lovely personification~*~one can get swept up in your words, my friend~*~

              

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