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Open Poetry #49
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Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2014-06-22 01:56 AM




The trees seemed to lose a bit of their touch
when the humidity began to rise
parched
with the need of comfort
their trees beginning to bristle even more
as more patrons began to pass by
The corner pastry shop by its side
adding a new level of its wooded mahogany floor
as people began to pass by
with great wonderment
staring at the menu
slight apprehension
as they began to waltz through
one by one
couples of older ages
kids still dreaming of shoes that they will fill one day when they're older
couples exchanging stares on every wooden based table
some round,
some rectangular
a downstairs that added a secrecy
gentle with the windows reading each and everyones face
as the trees outside began to look inside with great wonder
nature and grace together again.

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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
1 posted 2014-06-22 05:32 PM


There is a lot to like here...the scenery, the people and the whole idea of being on the outside looking in, and vice versa.

Always good to read you Tomer.

Tomer
Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
Michigan
2 posted 2014-06-22 09:03 PM


Blues,

Thanks for the kind comments.  Always appreciated.  Happy you enjoyed.

Tomer

bel1e
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since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631

3 posted 2014-07-02 09:03 AM


What a lovely stroll this was...

              

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