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0 posted 2014-06-11 06:26 PM



Pilgrims and Poets


In the patchwork land of green and gold
They walked where Chaucer’s tales were told
Cross the rambling rustic shires
To raise their eyes to the towering spires
From far flung lands across the sea
From Avalon and Linden Lea
~
Oh mother Church of England fair
In morning mass and evening prayer
Poets take up their pens and quills
And write of blue remembered hills
Ask is there honey still for tea
In Avalon and Linden Lea


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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2014-06-11 07:05 PM


Beautiful poetry with excellent rhyming. What's not to like? Welcome to PiP.

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BluesSerenade
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2 posted 2014-06-11 08:56 PM


Welcome to the blue sea...
I very much enjoyed your poem.
The old world rhyme is classic!!

bel1e
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3 posted 2014-07-02 09:33 AM


how lovely~*~

              

Redstart
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4 posted 2014-07-02 10:15 AM


You cross the heart of my England in grand poetic style. But, my heart now lies in Avalon.
Margherita
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5 posted 2014-07-02 01:22 PM


Welcome to Passions in Poetry. I much enjoyed your first entry!

Margherita

Michael
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6 posted 2014-07-02 06:31 PM


Wow, love the feel to this one... hope to see more from you soon.

Michael

icebox
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7 posted 2014-07-02 06:34 PM


Nicely done.  Welcome to PiP!
tracie66
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8 posted 2015-02-01 06:42 AM


such beauty in this well written piece - loved it!

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It is the harmony of the universe
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Marchmadness
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9 posted 2015-02-01 11:59 PM


Very pretty poem.
              Ida

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