Open Poetry #49 |
Beautiful Woman |
JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
she approached me on a blazing hot summer day late afternoon I’d never seen her before stood there waiting my mouth dry as desert sand because of her beauty she kept walking toward me showing a faint smile finally a broad grin broke over my face my feet began to move toward her I was bringing my arms up to shake hands or embrace her whatever she wanted from me she walked past me I was completely caught off guard when I turned and saw her hugging and kissing the man who was walking behind me ©April 20, 2014 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
another one that got away... sweet story |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hah! Yep, Emma, and there have been many, but never dashed my spirit, as I conrinued trying. Thank you. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Ouch! It's hard to leave me with a lack of words to describe how a poem makes me feel, or how it would make me feel if I were to place myself within it. Other than, "That's gotta suck," I come up with nothing here. Here's to a better day, friend. Michael |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Jerry P. Gave me a chuckle. Thank you. Jo |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hah! I hear you, Michael. It is a very awkward moment to be sure. Appreciate your thoughts. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanks Jo, a chuckle is a good thing and I'm happy to have given you one. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Isn't that the truth!! enjoyed j. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
You betcha, j. Thanks. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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