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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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0 posted 2014-06-07 08:56 AM



floating on apple blossom currents
spring fed rumor
across this great land
the girl of my dreams moans
into the wind
eyes watering as she waits for me
she knows I love her
her heart would stand naked
waiting for me to appear
her eyes glisten
in mere anticipation
she understands I cannot come
to her
she pulls herself together
breathes the thought
of hot hope
pulls her thin sweater around her shoulders
thinking of winter past

in her dreams
she sobs anew

©June 6, 2014 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

© Copyright 2014 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
Redstart
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since 2014-05-16
Posts 535

1 posted 2014-06-07 09:31 AM


I so understand this poem. I wrote a poem of the same title a few years back. I'm sure I even posted it on this site, a few years back, under another name, whose login details I lost with my old e.mail address.
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2014-06-07 10:00 AM


Thank you Redstart, and I sure understand about losing your identity on these Internet sites. I originally was JerryPat here, but because of a major problem I had to assume the name with a 2 on the end.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

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