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soul drifter
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since 2004-09-08
Posts 711
Colorado

0 posted 2014-06-06 03:56 PM


The Ride

Take a ride with me
you say only if it's free
free to roam, free to hide
all I'm asking for is the ride

Take a little time on me
you say well it don't come cheap
not so easy to get inside
all I'm asking for is the ride

Honey
if you don't like the groove
just call the tune
I've got the world to prove
so don't close this conversation
too soon
money
I feel like a million tonight
but you set the pace
I can feel the light
so why can't you show it on your face
such stubborn pride
but then, all I'm asking for is the ride

Take a ride with me
you say only to see
to see if this feels right
but all I'm asking for is the ride

Take a little time on me
you say well just wait and see
but you've got nothin' to hide
and all I'm asking for is the ride

All I'm saying tonight
is that you don't have to hide
I'm not asking you to come inside
anyway not yet
all I'm asking for is the ride
one I hope you won't forget



"Heaven is paved with broken glass,
since your hammer struck my heart" -XTC

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
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1 posted 2014-06-06 05:09 PM


Wouldn't think it would be all that difficult to take that ride. Enjoyed this, soul drifter,

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

soul drifter
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since 2004-09-08
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Colorado
2 posted 2014-06-06 05:13 PM


take a ride with HER!

Thanks.

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
3 posted 2014-06-06 05:21 PM


Sorry.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
4 posted 2014-06-06 08:40 PM


Oh man..turn that song up while you're at it.
Great poem, nice ride.

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