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lest you believe |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813
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Lack of words its torment the silence screams luminosity's lacking. Though this world's dark circumstances report it to have dimmed- the darkness has not taken the light. So lest you would believe otherwise- I am here to attest, it shines. The hearts that hold to faith keep it bright. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Three cheers for you, Luminosity, for staying in the light. The dark is there, but I have learn to avoid it mostly, so it seems, have you. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
 old ages does that for you...lol...gives us more smarts than there was when we were younger, and yep the dark is hurtful...good to stay clear |
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Redstart Senior Member
since 2014-05-16
Posts 535 |
There's certainly plenty reporting of dark circumstances in this world. But true faith, should you be fortunate enough to be blessed with is power source, would certainly lighten that darkness. Though that light can only ever be of a personal nature. Succinctly, but perfectly expressed. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh wow such a meaningful poem...speaks volumes. Very nice write. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Blues said it so well I'm just going to refer you back to hers (and that way you also get to re-read hers!...well done, my friend. j. |
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