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Open Poetry #49

Heaven Is For Real

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2014-06-04 12:50 PM

Heaven Is For Real

Sometimes I feel like
I am that innocent
little boy
upon the picture
in my hallway
that seems to be
just a little bit
out of place upon this earth
wanting someday
to live with angels
with smiling faces
in heavenly places,
for now I am
hoping there is room
in this great big world
for me and a Savior
named Jesus.

JamesLee
03June
2014

Redstart
Senior Member

since 2014-05-16

Posts 535

1 posted 2014-06-04 05:47 AM

A short poem, but long enough to express a feeling of detachment and loneliness that is palpable.

wordancer
Senior Member

since 2000-07-30

Posts 809
VA

2 posted 2014-06-04 10:44 AM

Sometimes, it does seem that world is too ... for there to be room for anyone, to be important enough. A thoughtful read. thanks!

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

3 posted 2014-06-05 09:04 PM

Perhaps we create our own reality, James.
Ida

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2014-06-06 12:16 PM

beautiful feelings, james,

yann

luminosity
Senior Member

since 2005-11-18

Posts 813

5 posted 2014-06-06 12:15 PM

big smiles...you gotta know luminosity would love this!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2014-06-09 07:12 PM

Thank you Redstart, wordancer, Marchmadness, 2islander2 and luminosity for the nice responses...as I walked by my childhood picture in the hallway my thoughts came to this...James

kingsangel
Member

since 2009-11-04

Posts 50