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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2014-05-31 09:36 PM


The Juggler

He throws
the words around
quite well
thinking that he has
many stories to tell,
time after time he
moves the words around
sometimes changing some
of the names
when he wants
a different sound,
but even though the
stories seem to change
they often remain
strangely the same.

JamesLee
31May
2014


  
    
    
    

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2014-05-31 09:50 PM


Hah! Maybe that's because he has been telling lies. The thing about telling lies, you have to remember the lies you told.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Sunshine
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2 posted 2014-05-31 11:53 PM


James....does Jerry's review make sense? I think it does....

sounds like you're going through some good mental talking....good job!

2islander2
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3 posted 2014-06-01 01:27 AM


don't let a word drop, very clever and fertile, thanks

yann

latearrival
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4 posted 2014-06-08 06:51 PM


Sounds like a salesman or a politician.
Enjoyed, Jo

jwesley
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5 posted 2014-06-08 06:57 PM


Good read, my friend...

j.

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2014-06-09 07:09 PM


Thank you Jerry, Sunshine, 2islander2,, latearrival and jwesley for the interesting responses...James
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7 posted 2014-06-09 07:57 PM


A lot of one-trick ponies out there.
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