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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea

0 posted 2014-05-29 03:31 PM



We are all a little bit crazy,
one day, one night,
embarked on heady dreams,
on streets of New York,
lovers as the moon of the sun,
we are all a little bit crazy,
when we believe that we can change the world,
when we are in love with a too beautiful girl,
and when we want to enjoy all the sauces,
when we believe that love is a recipe,
when we jump into a taxi which pleases us,
we are all a little bit crazy when we love,
we would want wether it is mutual,
but the earth does not stop spinning,
we would want Manhattan for one alone,
and we would like to be the spring every time we think,
we are all a little bit crazy, or completely, except when this girl makes you soar on her taxi, in the back,
and when her kisses are wheels ......

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2014-05-30 05:56 AM


Wow, dear Yann, this is electrifying and you rendered that special craziness that sometimes possesses us, in a fantastic way.

I love that kind of craziness, all things become possible and that's a good state of mind to be in, encouraging, inspiring, exciting!

Great write, dear Yann! One to read again, when we need something uplifting to MOVE out of our shells!

Love,
Margherita

EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376
Midwest
2 posted 2014-05-30 08:08 AM


this makes me feel that anything is possible and that feeling of being 'alive' comes to us in moments that sometimes are just magical
and not planned

Redstart
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since 2014-05-16
Posts 535

3 posted 2014-05-31 04:49 PM


Yes, we are all a little crazy. But, we can accept the beauty of reality, even though it be short-lived.

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !
4 posted 2014-05-31 09:26 PM


grand-fine mix of imagery and Romanticism.

The first line reminds me of a recent Country-Western song title:  
"God is great ... the beer is good ... and people are crazy!" ...
kinda' "sums it all up" ... 'life' that is !

... and, we are indeed most "alive" in those sparkling, transient moments of the 'now' ...
The 'past' is irrevocable ... the 'future' is as yet powerless to be born ... we have only
the grand-scintillating 'now' of infinitely positive potentialities in which to paint the world
in bright-delicious colors.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2014-06-19 07:38 PM


nice romantic writing...James
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