Open Poetry #49 |
The Dream |
Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
You came to me in my dream I remembered once again who I was The memory of a life long dead With you gone long cold I lost the last of my past I was free to lose everything I stare at the dead ground ahead Lifeless and barren it stands But I could give you once last hug You gave me one last gift A simple feeling of not being alone Just one last contact with the world You are a ghost You are a dream Yet you are the most real thing The only anchor I had until you went Washed away in life's stream Now I'm left alone once again To lose that life once again Yet indelibly you are printed On my heart and my memory Your ghost hand on my heart Forever guiding and leading me. I aint as good as I once was but I'm as good, once, as I ever was. - Toby Keith |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Walter, I see that we are in the same boat. No one cares to to deal with us. You speak of a lost love, I speak of nature denied. Maybe we will catch fire tomorrow. ~*~ The poor wish to be rich, the rich wish to be happy, the single wish to be married, and the married wish to be dead. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Walter your testimony to the power of love is awsome. I hope that power was acknowleged in life. It is precious and the kind of love I hope to be making in my own husband's heart. Lori |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
The memories of a lost love always haunt us ... and 'they' says time will make it better. I say NOT. Thanks for your words. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks for the poem, you made a beautiful encounter, a great french poet wrote, il n' y a pas d'amour heureux (there is no happy love), but memories keep us alive and poetry make it beautiful, thanks yann |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
This poem is dedicated to my grandmother the greatest woman I have ever known. I aint as good as I once was but I'm as good, once, as I ever was. - Toby Keith |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
fine writing...James |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This is so loving and full of heart... certain people make all the difference in our lives. I also like your signature quote. |
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