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Walter Poe
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0 posted 2014-05-25 09:25 PM



You came to me in my dream
I remembered once again who I was
The memory of a life long dead
With you gone long cold
I lost the last of my past
I was free to lose everything
I stare at the dead ground ahead
Lifeless and barren it stands
But I could give you once last hug
You gave me one last gift
A simple feeling of not being alone
Just one last contact with the world
You are a ghost
You are a dream
Yet you are the most real thing
The only anchor I had until you went
Washed away in life's stream
Now I'm left alone once again
To lose that life once again
Yet indelibly you are printed
On my heart and my memory
Your ghost hand on my heart
Forever guiding and leading me.


I aint as good as I once was but I'm as good, once, as I ever was. - Toby Keith

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2014-05-26 11:09 PM


Walter, I see that we are in the same boat. No one cares to to deal with us. You speak of a lost love, I speak of nature denied. Maybe we will catch fire tomorrow.

~*~ The poor wish to be rich, the rich wish to be happy, the single wish to be married, and the married wish to be dead. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2014-05-27 08:57 AM


Walter your testimony to the power of love is awsome. I hope that power was acknowleged in life. It is precious and the kind of love I hope to be making in my own husband's heart.

Lori

wordancer
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since 2000-07-30
Posts 809
VA
3 posted 2014-05-27 09:42 AM


The memories of a lost love always haunt us ... and 'they' says time will make it better.  I say NOT.  Thanks for your words.
2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
4 posted 2014-05-28 01:51 AM


thanks for the poem, you made a beautiful encounter, a great french poet wrote, il n' y a pas d'amour heureux (there is no happy love), but memories keep us alive and poetry make it beautiful, thanks


yann


  

Walter Poe
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since 1999-10-13
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5 posted 2014-06-03 11:24 AM


This poem is dedicated to my grandmother the greatest woman I have ever known.

I aint as good as I once was but I'm as good, once, as I ever was. - Toby Keith

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2014-06-09 07:15 PM


fine writing...James
BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
7 posted 2014-06-09 09:59 PM


This is so loving and full of heart... certain people make all the difference in our lives.

I also like your signature quote.

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