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secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
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a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2014-05-24 02:58 PM


     Beyond All of Life and Time

Just beyond an omnipotent sky,
spinning thunder and rainbows,
and a warmly gentle sunset
  afterglow,
here in the soft-streaming
  mountain moonlight,
tree-shadows dance with our
finest memories and dreams;
and all of life distills to the two
quintessential truths of transience
  and change,
until only love still stands as the
one hint and hope that our
spirit-hearts shall continue on
forever, to talk against time.

              --- b. e. adams (5/24/2014)
                  


© Copyright 2014 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
1 posted 2014-05-24 03:19 PM


Ahhh . . . Your poetry consistently sends out the word that love is the pure thought and meaning, even though love has proven itself to be fickle to the extreme. Ahhh . . . It is "true" love you really mean I believe, and on that point I must agree.

~*~ The poor wish to be rich, the rich wish to be happy, the single wish to be married, and the married wish to be dead. ~*~

latearrival
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since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499
Florida
2 posted 2014-05-24 04:02 PM


Bruce you continualy put out beautiful words and thoughts for us to read and learn from. Thank you, jo
Redstart
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since 2014-05-16
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3 posted 2014-05-24 05:53 PM


Yes, love is stronger than the spirit. If they be different, we'll find out beyond this world.
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2014-05-31 09:19 PM


fine writing...James
EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376
Midwest
5 posted 2014-06-02 07:19 PM


There's always a gift within the wrapping of your poems on PIP a sense of calm comes over the reader
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