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Nighttime Thoughts |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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 insubstantial slumber curse of living long enough to grow old close my eyes drift into kaleidoscope dreams open my eyes stare at the computer’s monitor listen to the rain falling on the window I have things on my mind to share but it's the midnight hour I’ve no one to tell them to and my keyboard refuses me ©April 10, 2014 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ Sex on television can't hurt you unless you fall off. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
In my opinion, the last line kicker to this poem makes this one of the loneliest of yours I have ever read... Lori  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Aww, just one of those time. We all get them every so often I think, Lori. thank you. ~*~ Sex on television can't hurt you unless you fall off. ~*~ |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
the photograph is great accompaniment to the dour tone of the poem. Well composed melancholia |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Appreciate your thoughtful comment, Emma and thank you too. ~*~ Sex on television can't hurt you unless you fall off. ~*~ |
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