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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2014-05-14 08:00 PM



illumination is as the sun reflects itself
upon the ocean
the ocean does not quench
the sun’s flames
even though its brightness is quite huge
the sun can be reflected
in a very small spot of water
ahhh . . .
the immensity and the complete
heavens
are reflected
in one dewdrop in a meadow

©April 11, 2014 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ Sex on television can't hurt you unless you fall off. ~*~

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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
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1 posted 2014-05-14 09:04 PM


Beautiful, Jerry.
            Ida

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2014-05-14 09:26 PM


Thank you Ida. I'm trying to not be so dark.

~*~ Sex on television can't hurt you unless you fall off. ~*~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (05-15-2014 06:58 AM).]

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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3 posted 2014-05-15 08:24 AM


Your effort met with success! Very much enjoyed this reflective piece.

Lori

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2014-05-15 08:33 AM


Thanks Lori.

~*~ Sex on television can't hurt you unless you fall off. ~*~

EmmaRose
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5 posted 2014-05-15 12:10 PM


YES there is such amazement in nature, how perfect it is , to us the imperfect ones
nice thoughts illuminated here

JerryPat2
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6 posted 2014-05-15 12:24 PM


Appreciate your kind thoughts, Emma, as always.

~*~ Sex on television can't hurt you unless you fall off. ~*~

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2014-06-04 12:41 PM


nice...James
JerryPat2
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8 posted 2014-06-04 07:11 AM


Thanks James.

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