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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2014-05-14 06:40 AM




Growing aches and pains
Groaning and moaning out loud
Wrinkles and drooping



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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2014-05-14 07:27 AM


Heh.Heh Happens to us all eventually.

~*~ Sex on television can't hurt you unless you fall off. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2014-05-14 08:14 AM


No, the good die young! heh heh

Lori

secondhanddreampoet
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3 posted 2014-05-14 08:53 AM


it's the 'gravity' of the situation ...
[They should repeal that 'law!']

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2014-05-14 09:37 AM


Yes Bruce, I agree 100%! It is laws like that one that make law abiding citizens look bad! LOL!

Lori

EmmaRose
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5 posted 2014-05-15 12:17 PM


aint it the truth?
I hear ya and second these plagues of
aging

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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6 posted 2014-05-15 01:25 PM


What makes it even worse is the commercials on TV that show older women in better shape in their 50-60's than I was in my 30's! Jeeze...

Lori

Redstart
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7 posted 2014-05-17 07:19 AM


A literary look in the mirror for me.(smiles)
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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8 posted 2014-05-17 07:33 AM


Redstart! Welcome to the blue buffet (as I fondly refer to these pages)I hope you feel welcome here. I'm delighted I made you smile, thank you for letting me know!

Lori

foxeh
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9 posted 2014-05-27 03:34 AM


Sounds like a painful trip to the bathroom if ya ask me! LOL

But it looks like that's the only relevance I'll know from this haiku at the tender age of 23.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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10 posted 2014-05-27 08:43 AM


LOL is right! If you want to get a taste of old age go out and do something that will make you stiff and sore the next day. Keep doing that untill stiff and sore in the morning gets to be real old.
Be good to your body now or it will punish you later

Lori

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