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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2014-05-13 10:36 PM


I Shall Remember You

In this empty mountain
  forest,
beneath a veiled
and enigmatic moon,
tree-specters rustle
and shadow dance
in the uncertain wind
and impure moonlight
along a thousand
endless paths
to nowhere.
How can I find
  my love
wandering these
ever many ways
I do not know;
and if we pass
through this life
never meeting
   again,
beyond this or
any other worlds,
in the space between
   spaces
and the farthest
reaches of eternity,
I shall remember
   you.

           --- b. e. adams (5/13/2014)


© Copyright 2014 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2014-05-13 11:02 PM


Ahhh . . . Seems we both had the moon on our minds tonight. You poem was for love nostalgic and I found it very much to my likening.

~*~ Sex on television can't hurt you unless you fall off. ~*~

EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376
Midwest
2 posted 2014-05-15 12:15 PM


your duo of love and nature comes off the pen with grace and realism
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2014-06-04 12:41 PM


enjoyed...James
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