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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2014-05-10 07:02 PM



Closer

In the late hours
of the night
I snuggle in my bed
and contemplate my life.
I know that some say
that what will be
will be...
still everynight
I wish you were
here with me,
I know you say
you love me
and I know
that I love you
still I desire
that kind of love
thats closer
when the day
is through.

JamesLee
10May
2014

  

  

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2014-05-11 09:46 AM


"still I desire
that kind of love
thats closer
when the day
is through."

From all you have written, I know that that is so true for you. Never lose that desire. Your heart knows what it needs.

Lori

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !
2 posted 2014-05-11 02:26 PM


simple, pure, and pleasant Romanticism!
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
3 posted 2014-05-11 02:29 PM


Life is meant to have love, a love to snuggle next to in the night.

~*~ How come abbreviated is such a long word? ~*~

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
4 posted 2014-05-11 08:13 PM


A lovely write!                                                                            M

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
5 posted 2014-05-12 02:32 AM


so true  and romantic, thanls for the enjoyable read, james,


yann

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2014-05-21 10:21 PM


Thank you Lori, secondhanddreampoet, Jerry, nakdthoughts and 2islander2 for the wonderful responses...James
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