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The Lunatic |
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ponderthepoetorrsx Member
since 2011-06-25
Posts 284U.S , Ca |
From whence I came, Nobody knows, Who I am, Nobody cares. But when I come, I'll hold your hand, And softly whisper Sweet melodies In your ear. I'll say "everything is fine" And like a streak of lightning Or the soft caress of a breeze, I will disappear. From mind and heart, From heart and mind. From whence I came Nobody knows, To where I'll go, Nobody cares. But I'll be here, To sooth those silent pains, To hope and dream In the midst of despair. From whence I came Nobody knows, But when I finish, I'll be gone. I'll disappear like sanity, From heart and mind, From mind and heart. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I like this! I have felt this way before. Lori  |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Help! I'm caught in a complimentary blue loop! I must submit! Lori |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Apparently the powers that be thought you needed to hear it again. Good job! I enjoyed your write. This is embarrassing- I've never seen anybody repeat themselves 3 times,jeeze! your poem is much better than these cheesy comments Lori the end |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
"Or the soft caress of a breeze, I will disappear." A lovely way to disapear. Would that we all could at times. enjoyed,jo |
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ponderthepoetorrsx Member
since 2011-06-25
Posts 284U.S , Ca |
I am very pleased that you were pleased sorry I could reply back on time I never received my email Richard |
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