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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2014-05-03 07:54 PM



Having  Wings


My sweetpie
is like an angel...

still I am wondering
if its possible
to love an angel
like a woman
in the flesh,

to me
angels seem
to possess a certain
amount of elusiveness

I mean,
is that why
angels have
wings.


JamesLee
02May
2014

  

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2014-05-03 08:26 PM


Oh angels are very nice all told, but the cause of all the trouble today, it is said, is an angel who fell

~*~ Why do we drive on a parkway and park on a driveway? ~*~

2islander2
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2 posted 2014-05-04 02:27 AM


splendid, James, you point out the question artfully, thanks for the superb poem,


yann

Margherita
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3 posted 2014-05-06 04:31 PM


Very lovely pondering about angels, dear James. Once you believe in their wings you are lifted up into dreamy heights.

Margherita

Namyh
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4 posted 2014-05-07 10:37 PM


James Michael - It's been said that angels have wings that flutter for the angel dust that falls on you. Then you're blessed to love an angel like a woman of flesh. You can bet I'm gonna be listening for the flutters. Much enjoyed this JM. Namyh
ebonygirl
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5 posted 2014-05-09 02:05 AM


Maybe angels have wings so that you may be carried
away by them to new heights.
Enjoyed your poem, James.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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6 posted 2014-05-09 06:30 AM


I never knew there was so much to know about angels! Now I know why I have this problem with dust. (thanks Namyh) Enjoyed your poem James.

Lori

secondhanddreampoet
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7 posted 2014-05-10 08:47 AM


very pleasant 'winged' penning !
JamesMichael
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8 posted 2014-05-10 06:49 PM


Thank you Jerry, 2islander2, Margherita, Namyh, ebonygirl, Lori and secondhanddreampoet for the wonderful and interesting responses...James
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