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Dreams Are Real Too
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Dreams Are Real Too |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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 watched you walking barefoot along the lakefront looking upward smiling at the moon’s grace later . . . you put your eyes on me long brown hair tousled into your face oh, I think poetry no matter how sensuous I can make the syntax it still will not serve to explain the throbbing of my heart as later . . . after the loving when you lay in my arms and murmured I love you over and over again as you slept March 29, 2014 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ Why do we drive on a parkway and park on a driveway? ~*~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I think you tell it quite well, dear Jerry. I would say dreams are a most fabulous reality, when it comes to romanticism and love ... they lift us up more than any dull pills. Very lovely. Margherita |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Jerry I don't think I could say it one word better than Margherita did. It really is lovely! Lori  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you Margherita and Lori, I appreciate your thoughts on my poem this morning. ~*~ Why do we drive on a parkway and park on a driveway? ~*~ |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a most fine mix of reality and romance! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you Bruce. ~*~ How come abbreviated is such a long word? ~*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
nice...James |
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