JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
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2014-04-30
07:21 PM
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watched you walking barefoot along the lakefront looking upward smiling at the moon’s grace later . . . you put your eyes on me long brown hair tousled into your face oh, I think poetry no matter how sensuous I can make the syntax it still will not serve to explain the throbbing of my heart as later . . . after the loving when you lay in my arms and murmured I love you over and over again as you slept
March 29, 2014 / Jerry Pat Bolton
~*~ Why do we drive on a parkway and park on a driveway? ~*~
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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
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2014-05-01
05:11 AM
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I think you tell it quite well, dear Jerry. I would say dreams are a most fabulous reality, when it comes to romanticism and love ... they lift us up more than any dull pills.
Very lovely.
Margherita
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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
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2014-05-01
05:36 AM
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Jerry I don't think I could say it one word better than Margherita did. It really is lovely!
Lori
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JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
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2014-05-01
07:36 AM
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Thank you Margherita and Lori, I appreciate your thoughts on my poem this morning.~*~ Why do we drive on a parkway and park on a driveway? ~*~
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secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !
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2014-05-10
08:51 AM
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a most fine mix of reality and romance!
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JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
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2014-05-10
09:37 AM
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Thank you Bruce.~*~ How come abbreviated is such a long word? ~*~
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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
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2014-05-21
10:34 PM
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nice...James
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