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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2014-04-29 09:09 PM



Listen


If I was to write
of the delites
of a sweet
Hawaiian night
I'd write of you.

Listen to the
winds softly blowing
as if they were knowing
that you are
in my arms
finding no finer place
to partake of the grace
of your silky charms.


JamesLee
28April
2014


    

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2014-04-29 10:29 PM


Using nature to accept the fact that you and your lover are wonderfully occupied is a true measure of poetical maneuvering, James.

~*~ Why is bra singular and panties plural? ~*~

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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2 posted 2014-04-30 04:29 AM


Well, there is no lovelier way to make the readers dream of charming Hawaiian nights, dear James. It is a perfect little romantic gem!

Margherita


BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
3 posted 2014-05-02 10:45 PM


Silky and smoothe.  You heighten my senses and took me there.  

Beautiful poem James

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2014-05-03 07:36 PM


Thank you Jerry, Margherita and Blues for the nice responses...James
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