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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2014-04-26 06:16 PM



death gave me a holler
I ignored it
sonofagun hollered again
said, step over here

I sauntered over
trying to scare me I thought
he doesn’t though

he showed me my casket
I was lying in it
I admit
that scared me some
it would you too

©March 27, 2014 / Jerry Pat Bolton


~*~ Why is bra singular and panties plural? ~*~

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2014-04-27 08:13 AM


That was a month ago... Glad you are still here. Hope your head is in a better place now than it was then.

Lori

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2014-04-27 09:34 AM


A dream. Just a dream, Lori. I'll admit death is on my mind more than it used to be. It's creeping up on me.

~*~ Why is bra singular and panties plural? ~*~

Margherita
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3 posted 2014-04-27 01:45 PM


Yes, no doubt that view would frighten me too, dear Jerry! It is true that with age we think about death much more. Your poem confronts us with its mystery and our natural reaction to the unknown. Very impressive.

Imagine that right now I am reading a book by Hermann Hesse which is actually a collection of his thoughts, letters, reports about getting old and about death: original title is "Mit der Reife wird man juenger" (With maturity we become younger). It is in the end about learning to face death, naturally, without fear, by letting go, by living consciously as long as we can, trusting Universe. Enjoying even the small things that life still offers us till the end.  

It is actually a bad thing that the topic death is mostly still taboo. I appreciate you talking about it.

Love and peace.
Margherita  

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2014-04-27 04:46 PM




~*~ Why is bra singular and panties plural? ~*~

JerryPat2
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5 posted 2014-04-27 04:50 PM


I think of death daily, Margherita. When you get to my age death is the most natural thing to think or muse about. After all we are much closer to death than we are most anything. When the next breath could be our last one, death is subconsciously on out mind twenty-four-seven. I'm certainly not morbid about it. Like the book you are reading by Hermann Hesse, I too am trying to come to grips with what is inevitable. I'm pretty much there, I do not dread it. I'd just like to pick the time, however. Thank you very much, Margherita, for commenting so intelligently on my little poem.

~*~ Why is bra singular and panties plural? ~*~

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