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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2014-04-25 01:57 PM





I’m so lucky that you love me
because I know I’m not easy
When some days I’m sunshine
then I turn into rain
I’m hard to understand
In some ways I’m wonderful
in others I’m just a pain
But for all my faults and failures
one thing will always be true
No matter how normal
I look or act
I’ll always be crazy
about you


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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2014-04-25 02:06 PM


Ahhh . . . You are getting very good at capping your poetry off with great last lines. This is one wonderful, heartfelt piece of writing.

~*~ Why is bra singular and panties plural? ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2014-04-25 02:09 PM


You must be rubbing off on me with the last line stuff. I'm glad you liked my latest endeavor.

Lori

Margherita
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3 posted 2014-04-25 04:41 PM


... and isn't that just a good thing, dear Lori! A healthy degree of craziness combined with your charming smile will certainly always be a winning team!

Delightful!

Love,
Margherita

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2014-04-25 05:19 PM


We all have are warts just the same. I tell him I'm awful! (wonderful)and he agrees then tells me I'm "awful purdy" too. He is the sweetest kindest most annoying man I have ever had the good fortune to fall  in love with! I have to admit most of his annoying is on purpose and done with a smile

Bless your heart Margherita!
Lori

EmmaRose
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5 posted 2014-04-25 06:09 PM


bland is no fun
I like it straight up with a twist myself

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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6 posted 2014-04-26 06:54 AM


I hear ya EmmaRose!! Indeed I do!!

Lori

secondhanddreampoet
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7 posted 2014-04-27 09:00 AM


fine Romantic 'reality' write!
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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8 posted 2014-04-27 04:35 PM


Thank you Bruce!

Lori

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2014-04-29 09:00 PM


enjoyed...James
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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10 posted 2014-04-30 09:18 AM


Thanks James!

Lori

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