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Margherita
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0 posted 2014-04-24 08:48 PM



Judas, you loved Jesus passionately
you saw in Him the One Who
would free your homeland from
the foreign oppressors.
He told you His kingdom
was not of this world.
That concept felt abstract to you
as you walked together
the same dusty earthly roads.

You wanted Him to show His power
by chasing away the enemy,
but He taught about the laws of love.
You insisted, but He choose to die
for reasons you couldn't understand.
Disappointment flooded your heart.

He knew how devoted you were,
He choose you to help Him
accomplish the sacred Scriptures.
He said “go now and do what you must do”!
It wasn't hatred that guided you,
but your hope that He would
use His divine power to save Himself
and all the oppressed people.

Your kiss was called the worst act
of betrayal, in the light of what happened next,
and yet you, Judas, had put your last hope in it.
Jesus was known to His persecutors,
that kiss of yours wasn't needed,
but you kissed Him anyway,
driven by a force greater than you.

In your heart you expected Him
to act like the Supreme Being
you knew He was.
But He choose the extreme humiliation instead.
You couldn't bear it,
pain exploded in your chest.
You couldn't bear it,
for your love for Him was all
that was left in the end.

Your every tear screamed “why?”.
No answer, no comfort, no hope,
nothing to hold on to.
On the threshold of deepest despair
in bitter solitude and full of remorse
you too choose to die.

But Jesus knew how deeply you loved Him.
Not damnation was His verdict but redemption.
He welcomed you in His kingdom
He opened the gates of heaven for you
for He loved you too.

As He loves us all for who we are,
divine offspring and children of eternity.
Like you, Judas,
we all shall leave our own darkness behind
and find our way back into the light
for ...

Not one soul will be lost.

In the end there will be only Love.

© Copyright 2014 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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1 posted 2014-04-24 10:23 PM


The interpretations of the Bible are varied and many. Judas was Judas, the betrayer. You interpreted his thoughts and gave them to us. But I wonder how you could believe you had the traitor's thought process. I don't remember a scripture which bears out Judas' thoughts, but I will admit I haven't read the scriptures in a very long time.

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2014-04-25 06:42 AM


Margerita
This is a most powerful write. I have never heard such an in depth explanation. You put the flesh and bone, suit and tie, hat and cane on what little is thought about Judas beyond simply being the betrayer of Jesus. You absolutely illuminate the love of God through out your piece. This poem would, in my humble opinion, make a great opening for a sermon during Lent. (I'm not that big on organized relgion, I'd like to hear it any time of year) Excellent and blessed work Margherita! (and this isn't even your first language!) You are amazing!

Lori

Margherita
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3 posted 2014-04-25 06:48 AM


Dear Jerry, thank you for reading my long text to the end and for your kindness in commenting. I knew my thoughts would ring "strange" as they certainly are in contrast to the traditional beliefs. Though my words were inspired by what we know from the Gospel, the development of my thoughts occurred within my heart. It's all about unconditional Love and forgiveness. I can't accept eternal condemnation for it is unthinkable, according to the Laws of Love preached and lived by Jesus. An unforgiving Supreme Being cannot co-exist within a universal dimension ruled by Love. Unfortunately during the centuries following the presence of Jesus on Earth many holy texts have suffered manipulation and so it is difficult to find the pure Truth. When we listen to our hearts truth reveals more often than when we trust men's interpretation. Thankfully there is freedom of thought (not everywhere!) and though I have been considered a rebel many times by "traditional believers" I continue to express my vision of things. My "vision" is rooted in Love.
Jesus has forgiven Peter though he had denied to know Him for three times the night before Jesus was nailed to the cross. And yet Jesus, despite this extremely painful denial, named Peter as the "rock" upon which the Church would be built. Forgiveness is the key to the Reign of Heaven. And in my opinion it applies to every single soul. Otherwise any religious theory vacillates and is bound to crash.
Love and peace.
Margherita

Margherita
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4 posted 2014-04-25 06:57 AM


Dear Lori, I was writing my comment to Jerry while you wrote your heartwarming comment to my thoughts. I am moved by your sensitive approach to the voice of my heart, thank you dearly! Yes, the central message of this text is Unconditional Divine Love and Salvation of every single soul. I have always been intrigued by this very special bond between Jesus and Judas. Such heartbreaking emotions involved. I had to write about it, no way to escape. Thank you again.
Love and peace.
Margherita

EmmaRose
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5 posted 2014-04-26 12:25 PM


Your vision radiates with pure love.
May your eyes see and shine over the ones
who need to take off their blinders to the Eternal truth

Margherita
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6 posted 2014-04-26 01:04 PM


Thank you so much, dear EmmaRose, for your poetic and loving comment. You bring a smile that radiates across this rainy afternoon.

Love and peace.
Margherita

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2014-04-29 09:03 PM


wonderful...James
Margherita
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8 posted 2014-04-30 04:36 AM


Thank you, dear James, for your loving comment here and in general for your generous presence on Pip, which sometimes seems to fall asleep. It's always a pleasure to see you reviving it, with your beautiful poetic contributions and with your loving comments.
Love and peace.
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

miscellanea
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9 posted 2014-05-28 10:49 PM


Margherita,

I've thought about this, too.  Your interpretation shows Jesus' unconditional love and understanding.   Beautifully said.

It is so good to read your words once again.

miscellanea  

LeeJ
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10 posted 2014-05-29 01:56 PM


yupper and there is "only love"  I'm smiling and waving at cha....what a glorious write
2islander2
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11 posted 2014-05-29 03:43 PM


hello Margherita, there was a judas, and God knew it, he is  a part of the mistery of Jesus, your poem point the contradiction of the betrayal, because Judas was kind of a necessity for the destiny of the lord, for Jesus find his Farher in Heaven, this is a very convincing poem and I know there are also books on this mystrious subject, thanks for sharing


yann

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12 posted 2014-05-29 05:14 PM


A most compelling read. I'm pleased that you didn't mention 30 pieces of silver, and selected a more conciliatory approach to Judas.
I've always seen him as a bit of a fall guy. His love for Jesus was never in doubt, as the taking of his own life would indicate.
Jesus was always aware that Judas would betray him and, indeed, encouraged him to do so. It was always God's will that Jesus should beat death and Judas was a pre-decided pawn in the process, who never truly realised the implications of his actions. Without Judas there could not have been a resurrection, and therefore no redemption for the world.  I hope this makes sense, because in the final conclusion, both Jesus and Judas never surrendered their love.

Mark Bohannan
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13 posted 2014-05-30 07:38 PM


This was a very enjoyable read and complete in it's portrayal. There are many directions you could have taken this and I applaud you for the direction you chose. Well done and beautiful.
Toerag
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14 posted 2014-09-10 09:55 AM


Hi ya gal, glad to see you're still posting and hanging around the blue pages. hope you're doing well
Toerag
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15 posted 2014-09-10 12:53 PM


well done gal...hope you're doing wel
Margherita
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16 posted 2014-09-10 06:16 PM


Thank you, dear Toerag, for diving and bringing this one back, and for your kind words. I am surprised to see this on top again and I am also sorry for not having thanked all the friends, who have taken the time to read my words and to comment so lovingly.

So I am going to mend my omission by sending each of you, Miscellanea, LeeJ, Yann, Redstart, Mark and Toerag a big friendly hug and my gratitude for your highly appreciated comments.

Love,
Margherita

jwesley
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17 posted 2014-09-10 11:00 PM


never been one to dive into religious based poetry but I do read a piece now and again (most any I see your name on) and as usual,
a beautiful written piece from you...

enjoyed, my friend.

j.

Marchmadness
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18 posted 2014-09-11 10:08 AM


I'm not that into organized religion myself, though I have no problem with the Great Spirit, But you write well on any subject.
Your loving nature always comes through.

                                Ida

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19 posted 2014-09-11 03:03 PM


A few years ago, I saw a production of Jesus Christ Superstar. Your poem reminds me of how the guy playing Judas said he prepared for the role... that he had to remember the love in order to play out the betrayal. His performance was beautiful and moving... so is your poem! *S*
s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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20 posted 2014-09-20 08:25 AM


This really is thought provoking. I've never really thought about how Judas must have felt. Enjoyed.

-Trina
I'll keep these dreams hidden
inside these eyes of mine
until my tears fall
unto my tainted hear

latearrival
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21 posted 2014-09-20 06:31 PM


Margherita,I have read and reread this
beautiful exchange of words and meanings you have given Judas.I think you are the only one who could have done this correctly. The thought and permission must have been sent and given to you by someone with the authority and who is above all the rest. Best to  you, jo

Margherita
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22 posted 2014-09-22 05:05 AM


Thank you all from my heart, dear Jimmy, Ida, Ruth, Trina and Martyjo, for your most loving comments. You bless me.

Love and peace.
Margherita  

KAM39
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23 posted 2014-09-25 10:46 AM


This poem was very thought provoking and somehow makes sense because of how the Bible plays this scenorio out. I still think we must be careful on how we view the unconditional love of God vs the acceptance of sin in our society though. I always be;lieved that we are to love the person and hate the sin, including our own. Loved this write and thanks for sharing.
Margherita
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24 posted 2014-09-29 07:18 AM



Dear KAM39, thank you for taking the time to read and comment so kindly on my poem. I agree with you insofar certainly we have to strive to live according to the heavenly laws of love and when we hurt others with our behavior we need to repent and ask to be forgiven, trying to change our attitude. Divine mercy is an incredibly generous gift and I believe we shall all be given the opportunity to repent and to experience the pain we have caused, so that we realize our mistakes. This will cause our awakening to love, which is the true goal of our existence.

Thank you.

Love and light.
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Gale
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25 posted 2014-09-29 02:33 PM


A very interesting vision of that story! I met not so many people who tried to understand Judas. Usually he is only blamed and stigmatized.
Thank you for sharing, Margherita!

Margherita
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26 posted 2014-09-29 06:28 PM


Thank you, dear Galina, for taking the time to read and comment so kindly. Sometimes only our heart may reveal an answer to our questions and interpretations; I have always felt compassion for Judas ... St. Peter denied to know Jesus and I found that harder to accept. But our weaknesses and fears sometimes paralyze us and make us blind to the truth. Thanks to God we are forgiven, for He knows our hearts better than we do!

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

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