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Rocko
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since 2014-03-10
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0 posted 2014-04-24 02:36 AM


By Radrook AKA Rocko


Tis A Pity!

Ohhhhh! how purple the skies and the trees
And the pink moon that�s glancing at me
And the bubbling flowers
Giving fragrance like showers'
And the green elves that dance gingerly.

Limpid rivers a-flowing sublime
Emerald shorelines where love intertwines
Charming laughter of child
Humid air un-defiled
And entrancing aroma of wine.

Dimpled damsels attired in white silk
freckled bosoms producing sweet milk
golden hair all adorned
with the brightness of morn
All my wildest desires fulfill

Wily willows all whisper my name
With their ever-melodious refrain
Captivate my emotions
Thrill my soul with devotions
Tis a pity that I am insane!

Satiate my emotions
Thrill my soul with devotions
Bitter pity that I am not sane

© Copyright 2014 Nelson Diaz - All Rights Reserved
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2014-04-24 05:47 AM


Tis a pity I'm crazy...about this poem.  It is full of all kinds of great stuff! Too many great lines to list here!  Enjoyed very much

Lori

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2014-04-24 07:24 AM


WoW! What a great poem to begin the day. I loved it.

~*~ Why is bra singular and panties plural? ~*~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2014-04-29 09:01 PM


nice...James
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
4 posted 2014-04-30 04:32 AM


Limpid rivers a-flowing sublime
Emerald shorelines where love intertwines
Charming laughter of child
Humid air un-defiled
And entrancing aroma of wine.


Very captivating indeed! Welcome to Pip! Looking forward to read you again.

Margherita

latearrival
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since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499
Florida
5 posted 2014-04-30 12:24 PM


Enjoyed this visual story of a point in
time. Jo Perry  

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