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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana

0 posted 2014-04-23 08:03 PM



the flashlight is more significant
than the beam it makes
the scribbling of notes in a tablet
is not nearly as significant
as the poem
ahhh . . . and when she kissed him
is more significant than their mouths
he wrote her letters
using ruled, coarse paper
a lead pencil
those letters were only tangible documents
still . . .
they are only letters
but letters which reveal
her exquisite loveliness
and his insanity

©March 25, 2014 / Jerry Pat Bolton



~*~ Why is bra singular and panties plural? ~*~

© Copyright 2014 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
1 posted 2014-04-23 09:25 PM


Awesome, my friend.

j.

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2014-04-23 09:29 PM


Thanks buddy, good to see you.

~*~ Why is bra singular and panties plural? ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
3 posted 2014-04-24 05:52 AM


Definitely a way cool, from me Jerry! Love your last line as always.

Lori

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
4 posted 2014-04-24 07:25 AM


Hi Lori. Thank you very much.

~*~ Why is bra singular and panties plural? ~*~

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