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Open Poetry #49

Until Then

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2014-04-23 07:38 AM

there is beauty in death
     a transitorily state of being
          soon to become
               as one with the earth itself
     if we have spirits as some believe
          mayhap we will meet again
               our passions we will unleash

©April 22, 2014 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ Why is bra singular and panties plural? ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2014-04-23 08:47 AM

I like to think I'm a spiritual being having a human expeience (not vice versa)I'm looking forward to that time when I am released from human constraints and can be the "unleashed" me. Looking forward to reuniting with other "unleashed" friends and relatives. I think you picked a good word "passion". I know we usually think of the word in sexual terms, but if you think of it as enthusiasm, then humans are all little cans of passion!

Lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2014-04-23 08:53 AM

Appreciate the kind thoughts about my poem, Lori, and thank you.

~*~ Why is bra singular and panties plural? ~*~

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

3 posted 2014-04-23 10:17 AM

this confirms that there is something after death hopefully which can make the thought of death easier to embrace

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2014-04-23 10:28 AM

Emma, we have to believe in "something" after death, otherwise why are we even here in the first place? Thank you for stopping by.

~*~ Why is bra singular and panties plural? ~*~

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