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JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2014-04-18 07:58 AM

woman has eyes which tighten
soft muscles that clench
she is as encompassing as a nugget smooth
unpretentious beneath a current of tête-à-tête
thighs and soft breasts bear
burden of woman
she laughs rowdily from deep within
with a nod and a wink
but located within herself is a girl
who still thinks of herself
as a naiveté
who cast her eyes demurely
but taken as a whole
she is a complete woman
as spicy as a dash of curry
multifariously sweet as honey

she is a live bomb ready to detonate
or a precious rose ready to flourish

©March 22, 2014 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ Love is friendship set on fire. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2014-04-18 10:28 AM

I don't think I have heard the fairer sex described in so many unique ways. I enjoyed the read. Being a woman myself, I took the discriptions in a compimentary fashion

Lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2014-04-18 10:34 AM

As well you should have taken the poem as complementary. That was my intent. Thank you Lori, for continuing to support my writing.

~*~ Love is friendship set on fire. ~*~

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

3 posted 2014-04-18 12:28 PM

Sound like you appreciate the fairer sex, indeed

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2014-04-18 12:34 PM

Oh yes, yes I do so appreciate women, Emma. You betcha!

~*~ Love is friendship set on fire. ~*~

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

5 posted 2014-04-19 08:35 AM

nice 'write!' ...

I especially liked that descriptor:

"spicy as a dash of curry
multifariously sweet as honey"

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2014-04-19 08:40 AM

Thanks Bruce, I appreciate your kind thoughts on my poem.

~*~ Love is friendship set on fire. ~*~

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