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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2014-04-16 01:26 PM





When we say we don’t know
When we do
When we say we aren’t
When we are
When we say we have
When we haven’t
When we say we didn’t
When we did
When we say we won’t
When we know darn good and well
We will

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2014-04-16 01:29 PM


Ahhh . . . Excellent dissecting of the denial word, Lori, my friend. I'll say it again. Excellent!

~*~ Love is friendship set on fire. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2014-04-16 01:31 PM


Thanks Jerry!
uh... I'm not going to go eat a cookie now.

Loir

JerryPat2
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3 posted 2014-04-16 01:36 PM


Heh.Heh

~*~ Love is friendship set on fire. ~*~

EmmaRose
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4 posted 2014-04-19 10:03 PM


yep,
conflicts in life
we are all so helplessly human afterall
give us a break

2islander2
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5 posted 2014-04-20 02:32 AM


smiles, so true end pretty written,


yann



ebonygirl
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6 posted 2014-04-20 04:30 AM


Lol... when we say we shouldn't
and we do.
Well done, Lori!
E

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2014-05-10 06:54 PM


"Honey don't, say you will when you won't, un uh honey don't...from a Beatles song...James
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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8 posted 2014-05-12 09:20 AM


Thanks everybody for your various comments, they have been wonderful to read! I have enjoyed your responses very much!

Lori

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