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Snow on the Crocus
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Snow on the Crocus |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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White crown on yellow head Royalty gathered at dawn Deposed by the sun |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Your words gave me visions of purple flowers and tender loving care. ~*~ Love is friendship set on fire. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Ha ha, that's funny, I saw daffodils! Really! And you saw purple! I think that is perdy cewel! Thank you for sharing your vision. Lori  |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
this speaks of how fragile beauty and life is |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I am amazed at how hearty the early spring perinnials are. Mine survived snow and frost! Lori |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What a great rendition of being "deposed"...you made me smile. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I'll take that as a grade A compliment! Thank you! Lori |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your words painted a beautiful scenery ... I love the vision, dear Lori! Love, Margherita |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Dearest Margherita, I may paint pictures for the mind's eye. but you paint pictures for the soul. Much love, Lori |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
fine imagery indeed (makes for a happy "mind's eye" and soul)! |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thank you very much Bruce |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
enjoyed...James |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
It's been so hot here of late, life itself seems yo have been deposed by the sun. A grand image your crocus bestows upon us. Michael |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Just as pretty as a picture. ..for sure.  |
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Redstart Senior Member
since 2014-05-16
Posts 535 |
Haiku is a delicate art. Fine brushwork abounds, despite the concise nature of the form. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lori…the title alone is a poem. Love the image you captured. |
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