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Open Poetry #49

The waiting branches

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

0 posted 2014-04-09 03:53 PM

Through the dark day
curtains, the cirrus bends
along the waiting branches,
with blooms of white

and dreams are spun
in your royal blue eyes

[This message has been edited by EmmaRose (04-09-2014 09:41 PM).]

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2014-04-09 04:07 PM

Ahhh . . . This is so effective in bringing out the stunning visual to my thoughts. It;s amazing how a few well chosen words can transport grand images to the reader. Excellent!

~*~ Love is friendship set on fire. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2014-04-10 06:42 AM

You paint the prettiest pictures EmmaRose!

Lori

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2014-04-23 12:26 PM

enjoyed...James

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

4 posted 2014-04-25 09:36 PM

fine imagery!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2014-04-26 05:20 AM

Wonderfully penned, dear EmmaRose. A real pleasure to read and "visualize"!

Love,
Margherta

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