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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea

0 posted 2014-04-05 02:09 AM


Not to give of lessons, it is to accost exactly in the country of others,
to build his house there, to be capable of living in it  and of living there,
of learning a lesson.

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Ticklefingers
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Posts 710
Louisiana
1 posted 2015-09-28 02:34 AM


It's my opinion that no matter what country you build it in, the pooch will go for it if the food dish is kept inside.

...or was it intended for her to put you in?


88's to the contractor and you friend for the fun I had with your ambiguous poetry.

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
2 posted 2015-09-28 11:26 AM


thanks ticklefingers, your comment make me think that we have no other choice that accept the intrusion of others and then criticize for ourself what we heard or understood, this is not easy but we ca progess together

thanks for your comment and reading and this piece of friendship you offered


yann

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2015-09-28 10:41 PM


nice writing...james
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