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Shadow Dance |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Shadow Dance The alabaster evening moon is my true compass. This forest in the twilight mist is serene sanctuary beyond all the grasping world of men. Here, where Time past flowing into Time future seems an illusion, just Spring and Love are grand and gentle masters of my heart. I taste the pure-lingering scent of blossoms and antiquity, as memories and thoughts of only you in the 'too far away' dance with the moonlit shadows. --- b. e. adams (4/2/2014) |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
Your poetry harkens the reader into the still and bliss of your moment, making it ours |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
thanks to each of you for commenting on this 'penning!' |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
The very first two lines grabbed me . . . quote: But the rest of the poem was a special rendering of the place where you reside and love. Your poetic words bear that out in wonderful thoughts penned with beauty in mind. ~*~ Love is friendship set on fire. ~*~ |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Truly beautiful poem, Bruce. Your writing always has a special elegance about it. Ida |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Beautiful poetry ! |
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