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Oh, I'm Not Deep
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Oh, I'm Not Deep |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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there’s nothing about me to explain I’m not all that deep much too dumb to be deep as Popeye sez I yam whot I yam I usually make myself pretty clear eh . . . my reputation maybe shaky but I’m not complex or not clear though I used to be myopic but seeing life on many different fronts altered my views these days if I don’t like you it’s because I don’t like YOU no other reason my life is an open book really, Misdemeanors & Felonies: A Memoir I write my poetry with a smirk and a scowl just the way I am even so there are tears in my lewd stuff I’m not long for this old world it’s coming that guy with the scythe after I’m gone there will be things said about me better not lie I’ll be listening and down the road what you might think is Karma will really be me, capise! ©March 15, 2014 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ In America, anyone can become president. That's the problem. ~*~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (04-01-2014 08:07 AM).] |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
you is what you is you are the real deal that comes through your poetry like a breath of fresh air to the reader |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ahhh . . . And you, Emma, know exactly what to say to make a guy's day. Thank you for saying it this morning. ~*~ In America, anyone can become president. That's the problem. ~*~ |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
being sincere when writing, is quite excellent, not safe sometimes in real life, but very interesting, thanks Jerry for the very good writing yann |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yeah, I hear you on the "real life" situation, Yann. I appreciate you stopping by. Thank you. ~*~ In America, anyone can become president. That's the problem. ~*~ |
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