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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana

0 posted 2014-03-30 03:18 PM



the day was coming to a close
that summer evening
soon to be a summer night
dusk and delicious
we encouraged the mood
as it purred by in outrageousness
we held our breath, bade it naughtily
to crouch and stay
that was the beginning of titillation juicy
this then is the cuddly of man and woman
and as a sensuous vulnerability
combined we two
lust upon lust, tasteless in its enthusiastic
as the universe thundered
what was mine was hers and hers
well, you know
the night was long
and was over in mere minutes
it seemed
as the sun glowed faintly in the east
dawn broke
we, more dead than alive
still we reached for the other again
and baptized the dawn
the only way we knew how

©March 13, 2014 / Jerry Pat Bolton


~*~ In America, anyone can become president. That's the problem. ~*~

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2014-03-30 04:44 PM


Well done! Everytime I thought you were going to TMI me, you pulled back. You still pushed the envelope as is your hallmark.

Lori

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2014-03-30 04:54 PM


Darn, I didn't think I was even close to upsetting you on this one. Thanks anyway for staying with it.

~*~ In America, anyone can become president. That's the problem. ~*~

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