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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2014-03-29 07:08 AM



Timeless tunes
A primal beat
Body swayin’
to melodies
and thrustin’
to rhythms
Syncopated
body parts
delight
in the dance
about the kitchen
Shimmy shakin’
the cobwebs out
as long as
no one’s lookin’
while I’m cookin’




© Copyright 2014 Lori Grosser Rhoden - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
1 posted 2014-03-29 08:04 AM


A humorous ditty this morning to get us all waiting for breakfast and watching the cook . . . er . . . cook.

~*~ In America, anyone can become president. That's the problem. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2014-03-29 08:19 AM


Nope, not while yer a watchin' I won't! LOL
You'd lose your appetite!

Lori

EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02
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Midwest
3 posted 2014-03-29 08:11 PM


I can relate
just add some vodka with a twist
and Im there

OwlSA
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Durban, South Africa
4 posted 2014-03-30 05:59 AM


Delightful, Lori.  Know the feeling, lol!

Owl

Daddy Goose38
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obama's a rice paper tiger
5 posted 2014-04-05 02:13 PM


But thank you, LGR, for letting me look. Daddygoose
Namyh
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6 posted 2014-04-05 11:17 PM


Lori - Just when you're swayin' to your shimmy shakin' tunes with abandon, the satellite uplink kicks in, GPS tracking stations engage, camera feed for 31 TV channels broadcast and there you are cooking with a big smile in the kitchen. Nowadays you just don't ever know who's looking at your reality. Most enjoyed this Lori. Now what's for chow? LOL. Namyh

[This message has been edited by Namyh (04-06-2014 08:26 AM).]

kingsangel
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7 posted 2014-04-06 11:59 AM


Thumbs up.....


secondhanddreampoet
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8 posted 2014-04-13 06:30 PM


culinary dancin' ... sounds interesting!
JamesMichael
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9 posted 2014-04-29 08:57 PM


nice...James
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
10 posted 2014-05-01 05:06 AM


Lori, that's wonderful ... you spice the food with your sensual dancing. (btw. I do that too and it's a very healthy habit, don't you think?!).

Enjoyed this much and it brought a broad smile.

Hugs.
Margherita

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