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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2014-03-20 08:22 AM




Slipping off into
sweet scented slumber
encircled in your arms
Your lullaby breathing
gentle upon my skin
drawing me deeper
into my dreams
where you are
waiting for me
with that smile



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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2014-03-20 08:41 AM


You captured the moment precious.

~*~ Better pass boldly into that other world, in the full glory of some passion, than fade and wither dismally with age.--James Joyce ~*~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (03-20-2014 09:29 AM).]

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2 posted 2014-03-20 10:30 AM


absolutely SUPERB succinct Romanticism at its very best!

To love, perchance to dream! ...

Kaoru
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3 posted 2014-03-21 01:05 PM


Absolutely beautiful !
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2014-03-22 08:11 PM


Jerry,
Thanks for commenting on this one. I thought I had already replied-obviously not!
You are too kind.

Lori

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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5 posted 2014-03-22 08:13 PM


Bruce,
What a lovely thing to say, thank you so much. Same apology to you as to Jerry.

Lori

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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6 posted 2014-03-22 08:15 PM


Kaoru,
I'm so happy you liked this poem. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment.

Lori

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2014-04-03 10:30 PM


nice and romantic...James
EmmaRose
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8 posted 2014-04-04 08:28 AM


sweet bliss
when it's like this, ain't it?

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