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Walter Poe
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since 1999-10-13
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0 posted 2014-03-19 08:03 PM



We revolve around the center
Always in sight
Forever out of reach
Its is the eternal goal
That glittering hope
That Endless wonder
Space and Time crystallized
to this single perfect moment
We reach out
We fail eternally

Look down upon us
We small insignificant creatures
On an endless rock
We spin
Always reaching
For our Suns

I aint as good as I once was but I'm as good, once, as I ever was. - Toby Keith

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2014-03-19 08:17 PM


It is that "forever out of reach" that get to us, I know that's right, Walter. Even as insignificant as we are, our egos transcend into the stratosphere. Enjoyed.

~*~ Better pass boldly into that other world, in the full glory of some passion, than fade and wither dismally with age.--James Joyce ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2014-03-19 10:43 PM


Walter,
...Always reaching
   For our Suns.
That really says alot. Great line'
Lori

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !
3 posted 2014-04-13 09:41 PM


indeed !
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